Script (update)

As we tried to sitck very closey to our script. But through this process, that not everything goes to plan. Below is a new updated version of our script, updates where carried out as the script was to long for an opening:

(2sec shot)- 3 men getting prepared for something, looking dodgy.Audience is left in uncertainty as to what.

(5sec shot)- Girl walks along a road at night, talking with her mum in a foreign language (subtitles are included in shot). The girls name is Shadei.

shadei: "Salam maman, "(mum speaks)" are residam ghorbunet, nigaran nabash enghadr. Dirooz saate 11 sobh residam Landan, mehdi omad dumbalam foroodgah.

(2sec shot)-men putting on gloves/shirts.

shadei: Na maman nigaran nabash pool daram. Alan dooste Mehdi mano davat karde restaraunt, daram miram sare kare mehdi ke ba ham berim restaraunt.

(2sec shot)- Men putting on balaclavas/masks/aprons.

shadei: man bayad beram maman, mobilam battery nadare, az restaraunt residam khone ba telephone khone behet zang mizanam".

(2sec shot)- one of the men is shown holding a tool

(3sec shot)- Girl still walking down the road, girl looking slightly frightened, and looks behind her to see if anyone is following her.

(2sec shot)- Guys in the van, a short shot of there hands about to open the door,audience is given idea that something bad's going to happen.

(1sec shot)- A close up of Shadei's face for just less than a second,more of a flicker of her face rather than an actual 1 second shot. This will help to create a sense of fright as it is going to be such a quick shot.

(1sec shot)- Guys jump out of van, grab Shadei and struggle to keep her quite while getting her back into the van as she is fighting them of.

Shadei:Velaaaam

Kon!Naaaa!Velam Konid!Komak!HELP HELP!" (speaks inforeign language, when she shouts "help"- she says it with an iranian accent.)




NEXT SCENE-LOCATION:(van)-

Ted's hand is covering shadei's mouth, but we still see her attempting to scream. Guy (2) passes rope to ted. Guy (3) holds Shadei as guy (2) and Ted try to wrap the rope around Shadei's mouth to stop her from screaming.

Ted: "Get me something to cover her fucking face! Now!"