The basic outline

Below is a very basic outline of my groups film:

1. Girl walking along a street at night, speaking a foreign language.
2. Men putting on gloves, shot doesnt include there faces, creating uncertainty for the audience.
3. Men take the girl.
4. Girl struggles.
5. We see another shot of men putting a balaclava/mask/something to cover there face.
6. Van screeches of.
7. Mens identity still not identified.
8. Van parks near a park.
9. They drag the girl into the middle of a forest like park.
10. They really hurt her, rip her clothes, rape her...and leave her to die.